{"id":1955,"date":"2019-06-14T20:55:58","date_gmt":"2019-06-14T18:55:58","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.dazzlepop.net\/site\/?p=1955"},"modified":"2019-06-14T20:56:01","modified_gmt":"2019-06-14T18:56:01","slug":"for-better-sales-writing-get-active","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.dazzlepop.net\/site\/for-better-sales-writing-get-active\/","title":{"rendered":"For Better Sales Writing, Get Active"},"content":{"rendered":"<div style=\"text-align:center\"><\/div>\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\">Make this shift in your business writing for more effective copy.<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p><a rel=\"noreferrer noopener\" target=\"_blank\" href=\"http:\/\/www.linkedin.com\/shareArticle?mini=true&amp;url=https:\/\/www.inc.com\/ford-transit-connect\/tip-of-the-day\/for-better-sales-writing-get-active.html&amp;title=For%20Better%20Sales%20Writing,%20Get%20Active&amp;summary=Make%20this%20shift%20in%20your%20business%20writing%20for%20more%20effective%20copy.&amp;source=Inc.com\"><\/a><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>This is one of the foundational blocks of good writing. Active voice has multiple benefits: it&#8217;s easier to understand, it usually requires fewer words, and it makes a message stronger and more exciting. Compare&nbsp;&#8220;More than 10,000 customers have been helped by our service&#8221;&nbsp;to&nbsp;&#8220;We have helped more than 10,000 customers.&#8221;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>In a sales email, passive voice makes you sound weak and unconvincing, which won&#8217;t help you build trust with a potential customer. There&#8217;s a time and place for passive voice in writing, but you&#8217;ll pretty much never encounter it while doing sales emails, so it&#8217;s best to follow the rule of avoiding it altogether.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><a rel=\"noreferrer noopener\" target=\"_blank\" href=\"https:\/\/www.facebook.com\/sharer\/sharer.php?u=https:\/\/www.inc.com\/ford-transit-connect\/tip-of-the-day\/for-better-sales-writing-get-active.html\"><\/a><a rel=\"noreferrer noopener\" target=\"_blank\" href=\"https:\/\/twitter.com\/intent\/tweet?url=https:\/\/www.inc.com\/ford-transit-connect\/tip-of-the-day\/for-better-sales-writing-get-active.html&amp;text=For%20Better%20Sales%20Writing,%20Get%20Active&amp;via=Inc\"><\/a>Source:  <a href=\"https:\/\/www.inc.com\/ford-transit-connect\/tip-of-the-day\/for-better-sales-writing-get-active.html\">https:\/\/www.inc.com\/ford-transit-connect\/tip-of-the-day\/for-better-sales-writing-get-active.html<\/a> <br><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Make this shift in your business writing for more effective copy. 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